With lonely waters,
in the moon and sky,
I praise of tears at home.
As I watched you
disappear into the
blue night with earths ohm.
Things of beauty
that burn onto my palm
I reach for my home.
Do not fade away
into the low waters
as I try to reminisce.
For there is no dawn
until dusk is my
reason to dismiss.
With tender lips
you speak of memory,
take my soul to kiss.
This night belongs
to you, my losing remiss.
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13 responses to “‘Remiss,”
Thanks for sharing JoJo.
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And thank you for reading, Anita ❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽
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So well written.
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Thank you so much, Lawrence! Truly appreciate your time to read my work ❤️ glad you liked it!!
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Wonderful work
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Thank you so much 🥰❤️ truly appreciate it!!
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You’re very welcome 😊
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Beautiful and smoothly flowing…
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Thank you so much, Lokesh 🙏🏽❤️
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A beautiful sadness in this break-up with a special person. To me, those escalated as the narrator seemed to have difficulty remembering that special person. As if the memories, like the person, are dissipating — as in these well-written lines: As I watched you / disappear into the / blue night”
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Dave, Thank you so much for your time to read my work ❤️ I’m glad you liked it! And yes indeed, well understood, it is about a special sadness in a break up. We all have that kind of sadness what inspires us to achieve great things. As she disappeared I saw my soul rise into something new and beautiful!
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This is so much deep to read, I read it twice, and it’s a beautiful work by a wonderful poet I can say. You’re too good at words!!
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Gosh, pruuu!!!! First I Just want to say; Thank you so MUCH for reading so MUCH of my work. All the comments had brighten my morning!! Wow!❤️❤️
Second, I’m so Glad you loved it! Truly appreciate your support and love ❤️ “speechless” over here!!
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