With evening roses in the dales
we sought for hope and pride.
Therefore, their throne is gone
as they drift apart from suicide.
For I follow the stream, during
tides flow, we swim under the riverside.
With drapery eyes I smell
the earths morning fog collide.
To near the edge, as I set my foot,
I stand tall and remember how you lied.
Reach out with care as we colour
our soul for the world to hide.
For I am frightened with melancholy
I will always wear my crown with pride.
To you I say goodbye to my home
as a new horizon was identified.
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17 responses to “‘Melancholy,”
Very beautiful. “Evening roses” is such a lovely wording.
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Thank you so much, J. Glad you liked it! When a simple picture of a rose in the dark inspired me! ☺️
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That’s brilliant! Inspiration is unexpected and always stunning. Thanks for sharing.
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Indeed, J. And ofcourse, Always my pleasure ☺️ did you btw see my “poem contest” that I have started? You should totally submit something, check out my post “poem contest” with all the details! (Don’t feel pressured to do so)
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Yeah I did! Love the idea. Maybe I will. 😏
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I loved the last lines! Melancholy with a silver lining.
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Yes indeed, Plaka. YES indeed, thanks for noticing it! Glad you loved it! Truly appreciate your time to read my work ❤️🙏🏽
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Absolutely moving and amazing. LOVE IT. May I post it on my website with your permission? You will be honored by others . . . If you prefer I don’t “pass it on”, I totally understand.
Dr. Deb
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Hi, Dr. Deb. Thank you so much for your time to read my work, and I’m so glad you liked it! Truly appreciate it! And yes ofcourse, you can share my work. It’s an honour! ☺️🙏🏽
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You are a nice man. I think your readers very curious to hear what you are going to say next. It is a good poem, I enjoyed it.🙂
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Thank you so much, Lokesh! Truly appreciate your kind and loving words! ☺️ Glad you liked my work. ❤️
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beautiful
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Thank you so much, Truly appreciate it 🙏🏽❤️
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much, Charmaine 🙏🏽❤️ truly appreciate your time to read my work!!
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Deep. Really loved it!
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🙏🏽❤️😍
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