In the dark, where my tears hide,
I doubt my path that I will take.
Onwards to the shallow night
I find beauty in any mistake.
Here I belong, as I wait,
in front of the dawn to wake.
Yet I perish, as roses bloom,
the thorns beside my truthful heart.
For A moment I believe,
without sorrow, we are one tear apart.
A whisper has spoken to my soul today;
“Here I see beauty hidden in your art.”
To dream of another reality, by night,
I sought for the northern light.
Once upon a midnight, as I translated into the sky,
the stars sparkle bright…
Follow me on my next channels and have a delight follow;
Do you want to “Help a brother out” please check out the next link; “JJ-stache” As love is a mystery felt by your heart we need to support one another. Do not feel obligated to do so, just have fun. I Want to thank everyone for taking their time to read my work!
With much love & inspiration written by me,
41 responses to “‘Onwards,”
Beautiful!
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Thank you so much, nick! TRULY appreciate your time to read my work ❤️ glad you liked it!!
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This so beautiful, I absolutely love it 🖤
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Ahww, Thank you so much, ace!!! Truly appreciate it, I’m glad you loved it!! 😊❤️
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Of course!! 🖤🤗
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Keep shining, keep inspiring.🤗❤👊
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Thank you so much, I will definitely do that 😊❤️ you too!!
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Amazing 💕
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Hihihih thank you so much ❤️ glad you liked it!!
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Beautiful Jo. 🤝
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Thank you so much, Sho ❤️
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This is beautiful ♥️
Loved to read jj✨
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Arry, Thank you so much! I’m so glad you loved it ❤️ I Hope you are doing well this Sunday 😊
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😊ya I loved it!
And yes I’m doing well..just exam pressure.. that’s it😂
Hope you’re good too!
Have a great day ✨
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Hihihih yaaay 🤭😍 gosh, still working on your exams😭 can’t wait for you to be done with it!
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Yup! Still on my exams 😭 even I can’t wait for it to end!! Good thing.. Monday is the last one! 😛
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Ohwww finally, well rock that one like you have never rocked before, Arry!! Glad all is well with you, same here though. Just been busy as well! As usual 😂😜
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Heyy! Thank you so much for the lovely good luck wish 😇!
Glad all’s well with you too! Being busy in good work is good though 🤭! Carry on!
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Ofcourse, Arry! It’s always my pleasure to support one another! As I always say; “one community, one goal. To write and inspire!”
And yes, I Will 😊❤️
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Wow! Very well said and quoted! Yes “one community, one goal. To write and inspire” ✨
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🤭❤️ amen👏🏽👏🏽
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Lovely!
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Thank you so much 🥰 glad you liked it!!
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Loved it, great poem 😊🥰🥰
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Thank you so much, arria 😊 truly appreciate your time for reading my work ❤️ glad you loved it!!🥰
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Thank you I’m new here I’m here for only two days this was one of the first poems I read and it was great ☺️
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Well arria, let me be the first one to welcome you to this lovely community that we call WP. I Hope you Will enjoy your journey over here! 😊❤️ You can call me JoJo or JJ 😊 Take care of yourself and see you around!
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Thank you!! see you too 😊
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❤️🥰🤭
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Bella 😊❤️
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Pat on back to you jojo👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Thank you so much, Soni ❤️🤗❤️🙏🏽
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Loved this😆
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Thank you so much, Vikki!! ☺️🙏🏽
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Umm I would must say that it’s so very lovely. You know? But what I feel is ” When you fall in love with a writer, you can never die. ” I can dedicate it to you, you’re too much older than me and I’m just a tiny heart but just dedicating to give you love and good hopes to never ever stop writing. And it’s okay break up happens, I can feel that deep pain but still we all readers love you for your fabulous heart work, like hand work it’s your heart work I’d say. Keep writing, just keep writing because what I’m living on my heartbreaking life is ” Just love on, still in spirit, act with heart. Also with patience. ” it’s a words from a poem A Psalm of Life
BY Henry Wadsworth Longfellow. So we’re all with you, whenever need just pop up okay!?
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” Just live on *.. Typos >_<
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Pfff, pruuu. How do I even respond to this, gosh. My heart is melting and glowing at the same time ❤️🙏🏽 you have inspired me so much with all you loving and beautiful comments 😍 I promise to my heart to always to listen to her, because she has guided me throughout many beautiful and painful moments, but I only got stronger!!
Ps, Henry Wadsworth is amazing 🙏🏽
You are amazing! ❤️
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More love to you always!! ❤
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” Just move on * uff these typos I hate it >_<
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