Father,
Trust my plea;
“I will not fall nor cry.”
For I have forgiven thou tears
on my shoulders with one lie.
While pettish tears resemble
rose-petals, I seek for the why.
From an aspiring flower
I follow thee to the night-sky.
What am I without my heart?
In heaven, with angels, the leaf
falls from my roses thorn.
To bear wings under my shoulders
with angels I was born.
Beyond the line of blue,
in the deep sky, in all fair we mourn.
Forgive me, for I can’t speak
as my tongue whittles torn.
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With much love & inspiration written by me,
27 responses to “‘tears,”
A wonderful poem as always
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Ahw, thank you so much, Rhiannon ☺️🙏🏽 truly appreciate your time to read my work ❤️
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Wow, it’s beautiful; your words are sublime.
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Ahw thank you so much ☺️🙏🏽 I truly appreciate your time to read my work ❤️
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Wow…. Loved it jj. Beautiful words with deep meanings. Somewhat sad for me, but painfully lovely 😊🌹❤️
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Ahhww thank you so much, A! Like I said before, I had to dig deep for those emotions! But, I’m glad it had the “painfully beautiful” meaning to you ❤️☺️🙏🏽
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Well keep digging deep… Your poems are beautiful 😊🌹
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I Will do my Best ☺️🙏🏽❤️ you see, already got me motivated to write, didn’t have my breakfast yet! 🤣😂🙏🏽
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Awesome 😊
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your blog is amazing!
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Thank you so much ❤️🥰
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Wowwww touching💗💗💗
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Ahww Thank you so much, Soni ❤️❤️
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Love this💚
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Thank you so much, Victoria 😊❤️
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Deep words as usual!!
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As usual, Thank you so much!
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I wanna talk with you poet sir, just a little if you got 5 mins for me, as you know I love writers alot!! Where can I?
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Idk, what do you suggest? I have Instagram, Twitter where we can talk without inspectors! You can find me with JoJo al-waealy. Private message
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Are you on for now? I’ll give uh a follow on twtr if only you’re on, because I don’t open that app much!!
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I’m not on at This moment, I’m posting my newest post in couple minutes and after that I’m busy again. Wednesday will do for me, I have a day off then. Will that work for you?
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Yes yes will work out!!
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Deal, this Wednesday you can ask anything you would like to know. Message me whenever you like and we Will see how we can work it out!
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So excited to talk to a writer omg! Jumping as a kid. I’ve always dreamt to have at least a talk with any famous writer like ” Jennifer Niven the writer of my favorite novel ‘ All the bright places. ‘ ”
Well Thank youuuuuu for giving me time to talk, thank you so much!!
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Hahahaha aahwww, blessed by your words. I’m not a really”famous writer”, but I wish one day I could be 😳 and yes, agree with you about Jennifer Niven.
Always my pleasure to meet the person who reads my work❤️👏🏽
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That day will come soon when lots of fans like me will support you and will read your work, trust me.
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Hihihih that’s the spirit and the double love I can’t handle, but love to handle❤️👏🏽 you can do it!! Believe in yourself and the rest will follow!!
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