JJ-stache

‘Absence,

The feel of morning dew

lingers over me as chilly air.

Once upon a time I bow my head

with a deep sniff I reckon my heir.

One drip of tear away I stare

thee blindly if only heard by my prayer.

Oh’ listen to my thought;

“I fall with my rising enemy.

In slow meadow, I embrace my liberty.”

In endless fragments of time

I see thou face as it was sublime.

To as I shallowly follow the darkness

the deep watch became my rhyme.

In absence I feel shades over my body

while I close my eyes during night-time.

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With much love & inspiration written by me,

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12 responses to “‘Absence,”

  1. This is beautiful. To me, it illustrates a deep yearning for the return of something that was once attached. Whether that be another person, or the missing knowledge for what one comprehended was their actualized identity. This piece evokes a sense of being lost, either within a void or wandering outside of it on the quest to see if the familiar feeling can be, once more, reunited with them.

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    • Wow, I’m so flabbergasted. You got all of that from one poem ❤️ truly, it means a bunch to me! To know that people could understand my words and yet have their own assumption!
      Thanks for that amazing comment! You are correct Indeed, it’s about “deep yearning for the return of something that was once attached.” Whatever you want it to be.

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  2. BEAUTIFUL…jj, really loved each line. Feelings of loss, lost, want, yearning, desire have filled my soul. You have written this so delicately, it felt smooth and flowed perfectly. Another heartwarming poem, though a sadness is felt, it expresses great depths of beauty, that linger ❤️😊🌹

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    • Wow, gosh. Really. It still flabbergasted me that people understand my words, and yet can have their own assumption about it. In a good way. It is Indeed and emotional yearning for something or someone what has been lost.

      I’m so glad you loved it once again, A❤️🙏🏽 truly means a bunch to me 🤭

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