One crying tear away
from a shallow fall.
My muse, of beauty,
in the starry nights,
yet I feel so small.
The last surviving
tear that keeps
me standing tall.
Catch my rains
as I am building my wall.
What does the sky see
While slowly I wake
behind windfall.
From far away,
in dims of the night,
I wish for you
to never let me go.
For I sleep at last under
a shimmer lights from above.
See my mourning dove,
therefore I hold my love.
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With much love & inspiration written by me,
29 responses to “‘aware,”
So eloquently penned. Love as muse, as teardrops as rain. All wonderfully woven, masterfully. I love it!!❤😊
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Thank you so much, Suzette!❤️ I Hope you are doing well, though? Thanks for your time and lovely comment ☺️❤️
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Thank you Jojo. I am well. Blessings to you. Stay safe. Happy writing. You have an amazing way with words! Cheers
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That’s great, Suzette ☺️ and thanks for the compliment, truly appreciate it ❤️🙏🏽 you too stay safe!
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Cheers 😊👍
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Well written
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Thank you so much ❤️🙏🏽
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My Pleasure 😀
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I’m building a Facebook page, “Found Online,” where I can link to poems I really enjoy for others to explore. This poem is one I chose to link to. Check out the page at: https://www.facebook.com/joestoutfoundonline
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Thank you so much for sharing my work, really appreciate it ❤️ I hope your page will be successful ☺️🙏🏽 blessed to be One of the first!!
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Truly beautiful.
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Thank you so much, LaDonna ❤️🙏🏽
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Truly beautiful jj… Perfectly written and expressed. Very touching. Smooth lines of refinement. Loving your work 🙂🌹
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Aahwww Thank you so much, A 🤭🤭 glad you love my work❤️❤️
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Words that arouse inexplicable emotions! 💕🌸
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Ahhww thank you so much, Sonali ❤️ truly appreciate your time to read my work, once again! ☺️
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I never want to miss reading your pieces even though I am not getting on here enough. But whenever I do, I love going through what you have been writing.
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Ahww, that means a bunch to me🤭❤️ really appreciate it! Thank you for your support and kindness! I hope you are doing well☺️
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Looking forward to all the magic you’ll create with your words ✨❤️
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Ahhww, Thank you so much ❤️🙏🏽🤭 can’t wait to share my work!!
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You’re welcome Jojo! ❤️❤️ Good luck🌸
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Thank you, Sonali! To you too all the best and luck 🤭❤️
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Beautifully penned! I appreciate the way you have delineated your thoughts. Such a mind boggling approach. Just awesome!
But hey! I have just started blogging on positivity and motivation. It will mean world to me if you can pay a visit to my page and shower some love. I am waiting for your feedbacks eagerly.
Thank you. Have a great day.
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Hi there, very eloquently you have expressed the language of tears. That was lovely. (I know I am late, long time, being a sloth is a tough job friend!)
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Nebulaa, my long lost friend! My dearest, sloth. I totally get it, it’s really tough!! 😜
Sometimes it gets hard in life, the only thing we can do is to appreciate the silver lining!!
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Ahem, I got only stretch marks to look at! (LOL, excuse me for the poor joke!)
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Hahahaha 🤣😆🤣
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Enchanting!! ❤
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☺️❤️
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