Oh’ watch me break down
and hear my voice crumble.
I Have lost my desire till the
strength of the waves
catches me humble.
I Am frightened, what if?
I ask myself; What if I fall?
Am I ready to rise?
Even when I feel so small.
Catch me and I shall
owe you my first crawl.
To this day I wasn’t
a man with a pleasant wall.
Locked down, in despair,
I sought for a moment of air.
Let me breathe, As I suffocate
with father’s stare… Where?
With no prayer I cry
and scream for you to care.
Somehow I peeled my layers,
while lying, it felt unfair.
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25 responses to “‘Alone,”
I Have lost my desire till the
strength of the waves
Written with such gorgeous emotions. I loved reading this.
This part as well, “Am I ready to rise?” Such a question. Brilliant write-up, Jojo. As always. 😄🌻💙
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Thank you so much, J. Truly appreciate it!❤️ I’m glad you loved it once again, as Always ☺️🖖❤️
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Relateable, nice one Jo-jo
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Thank you so much, Jay 🖖☺️❤️
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Wow!! ❤️
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Thank you so much, Mara 🤭❤️ I truly appreciate your time to read my work ☺️😊
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I am definitely ready to rise🤪🤪…great post🧡🧡
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Hahaha that’s the spirit! Hihihih Thank you so much, Anna! I’m glad you liked it! ☺️😊 I truly appreciate your time to read my work ❤️☺️
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You are welcome🧡
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“What if I fall?” What next if I fall, that’s so relatable. Similarly “peeling layers” part, especially it being unfair ❤.
((Don’t mind, I read it somewhere and felt like sharing for a laugh, “I will catch you if you fall”- Ground ))
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Hahaha LOL. 🤣 The “ground” does hurt, I can tell you that. 👀 There’s one thing that I know for sure, never stop “peeling layers” if you want to grow. ☺️
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You got experience 😎. But after peeling layers, try to fall gently as then the ground will hurt more, especially if it’s out there cold! 😛
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Hahaha, I Will do my best. If only there was a cushion to soften my fall 😜
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Oooo delightful jj…. Really pure words, such truth and beauty behind each line. If you fall, so fall, hasananaan 😊🌻
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Ohww Gosh, you make me blush 🤭😳 truly appreciate your positive and loving comment ❤️
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So welcome 😊
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❤️☺️
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you so much, Sirishty 😊🤭
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You’re welcome Jj! Hope you’re doing good!
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Hihihih, I’m doing fine actually, Thanks for asking 😊 how have you been?
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I’m doing fine too, thank you for asking. Stay safe and keep writing! 👌👌😊
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That’s Great, Sirishty 😊 you too keep writing!! 🖖🏽☺️
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It’s difficult When you’re alone. Too much deeply beautiful words again!! Oh God! Someone please multiply Jojo poet sir’s fan followers to million!!
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Hihihih yes please 😳👀
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