I Have this feeling that holds me down.
“If I was true, then I shall speak off not missing
you.
To be,
if not lost,
with one of the few.
Let me arise and seek for the blue.”
Face to face we stand
as we have one emotion
we cannot feel. By the truth of your identity
I shall walk down the lane and enjoy the view.
My Jane Eyre, if not seen by the eyes
we feel by heart. To as we behold our breath through.
One equals the love for two as we hear this melody
falling from the skies. A Symphony
within one tear of the true.
Do you want to “Help a brother out” please check out the next link; “JJ-stache” As love is a mystery felt by your heart we need to support one another. Do not feel obligated to do so, just have fun. I Want to thank everyone for taking their time to read my work!
With much love & inspiration written by me,
10 responses to “‘Jane,”
Wow jojo very beautiful ❤️ ended perfectly, “a symphony within one tear of the true” wonderful 😊❤️🌹
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ahhh thank you so much, A!!❤️ I’m glad you loved the Ending 🙏🏽 hihih🤭❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your welcome 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
“Face to face we stand as we have one emotion we cannot feel.” Oh yes, that’s a perfect line. So poignant and relatable. And I loved “my Jane Ayre” Aww 😍
LikeLiked by 1 person
☺️🙏🏽❤️ hihihih Thank you so much, Nebula! Especially the “face to face” part. Sometimes it’s Just like that.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I was thinking of so many things while I was reading because I am feeling so many emotions these days.
LikeLiked by 1 person
We all have those days. When everything is a mess in our minds, when we don’t know the difference between black and white, and whenever everything is just kinda messy. But, eventually you will get out of it and be stronger than ever 🙏🏽❤️ I’m glad my work got to you, though.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Jo! Hopefully, one day. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
” Let me arise and seek for the blue.”
” A Symphony
within one tear of the true.”
Oh God!! God bless youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu with a loads of happiness for making my heart calm by your poem!!!!!!!!!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m glad my poems calm down your heart ❤️❤️ thank you so much for reading all my work, Pruuu 😍🌹🙏🏽
LikeLiked by 1 person