My love,
I could not share you my heart.
To this day I was afraid, terrified
and shivering from the unknown art.
My love,
To be caught in a lie of a mystery
I have shared your stories
with no unpleasant history.
My love,
Let me share the thing that we love.
To fly into the sky, we must be free
to catch our soul from above.
My Love,
To hold or behold our dreams
while I surrender my nightmares
into sky behind the stars-streams.
My love,
We are no more, no less than a puzzle piece,
who did not connect with one another,
with this I have peace.
34 responses to “‘Amare,”
You indeed have amazing writing style, skill … Talented poet…great piece👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🥳❤️
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Hihihih, aahwww Soni. Thank you so, so, so MUCH dear 🤭🤭😍😍 you make me blush 🙈😳
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😄😄😄 hahahaha… Keep blushing..keep writing…keep rising…😄😄
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Hahahah Thank you!! Sorry, your message got in my spam folder 😭🤧 gladly o check it every day.
Hahaha but I Will definitely do that!🤫😏❤️
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That’s sad 😦
Puzzle pieces are only intended to connect with particular other puzzle pieces… so if they don’t connect, what options are they left with?
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And that, Ben, is a very good question to ask! What more can we do with the not so well connected puzzle pieces 🤷🏽♂️
Thanks for reading my work and for your time to respond as well!! I truly appreciate it 😊
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if we put puzzle pieces in water 💦, they become soft and we can bend them around one another…
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Hahaha that’s the way of a optimist, and sir, I like the way you think!!! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽 I got the glue! Let stick some puzzle pieces together🤷🏽♂️💯
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You know, I’m skeptical about God’s involvement in our human lives, but there’s a Jewish idea that since completing Creation, God has been busy pairing couples 💑
See: https://www.aish.com/48960726.html
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Awwwww wow jojo this is just beautiful…❤️❤️ ‘To hold or behold our dreams while I surrender my nightmares into sky behind the stars-streams’ love it. It’s sad but very sincere and sweet, everything you wrote is soul bound. Perfectly written and expressed, love your work it’s amazing 🌹😊❤️❤️
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Hihihih aahww , A!!!!!!!! Thank you so much, dear 😍😍 gosh, so sweet and amazing of you to say 🙈🤭 I’m glad you love my work!! I truly appreciate it!!
Thanks again for this amazing suprise and feedback ❤️❤️😍😍
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You are welcome…. I’m just speaking the truth. Surprise? How is it a surprise? You know I think your pieces are some of the most beautiful poetry I’ve read ❤️❤️🌹🌹😊
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Hahahaha… True, it can be not be a surprise anymore for me🙈🙈😂😂😳😳 but still, and pardon my french “I ducking love it!” It Just still amazes me. That’s why 🙈 I Hope you Will have a lovely day today though 😊 where are you from if I may ask 😊
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Hahaha 🤣🤣… Australia. My day is nearly over 😊
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Hahahaha, whoops. Well have a Lovely evening then!! But Australia, awesome. Definitely in my top 3 of my bucket list! Backpacking through Australia sounds amazing! Let’s Just hope this whole covid-19 is over soon.. and in mean time, Amirah, I say to you, goodnight and don’t let the bed bugs bite! ( Have to make this obviously joke, “smell you later alligator”)🙏🏽❤️🤭😍
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Lol 🤣. In a while crocodile 😉… Have a great day 💓
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To fly in sky we must be free… to catch our would from above…
what beauty 👏👏
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Hihihih thank you so much, paayal!! 😊 I truly appreciate it!! I’m glad you liked it! ❤️😊
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I don’t though…
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To do or not to do… Of This occured mind we are free🙏🏽
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The last three lines were magical!
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Thank you very much 😊 I truly appreciate it!! 😊❤️
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Oh I love it 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙏🏽😊 I truly appreciate it!!!😊
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You are welcome 🙂
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😊🙏🏽🖖🏽
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Beautiful 💙. Thanks for visiting my blog.
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Thank you very much, and it was a pleasure! Thank you for visiting back☺️❤️
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No matter how sad it is but still a hope is whispering through your poem, an acceptance and a long held burden let go of.
“we are not broken just bent, and we can learn to love (I would rather change love to LIVE, Gosh how similar are they) again”. (P!ink)
Beautiful poem ☺️. And for the puzzle pieces, well don’t we all adjust a little, holding our breath to flatten out our balloon belly to make some space for the other 😅
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This is so true and beautiful Said, Nebula!
Thank you once again for reading my work and for this lovely comment!!
For me, love is not a priority at this moment. For me, to live is what I do Indeed! All those love poems that I have written is Just a way of outlet, but to live is what I do! Tbh, this is the first time in my life that I truly can say ” I’m taking care of myself” Always put myself on second place, but now I know how to manage myself more and more!
And yes, all puzzle pieces have to bend a Little bit. Or as Ben Alexander said, use same water to stick them together!!
Thank you so much again, Nebula ❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 take care of yourself, darling!!
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Remove these “Thank You”s kid. And, I am proud of you son! 🙃 Needless to say, you must be taking care of yourself.
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Hahahahah okay, that was the last one. I pinky promise 😂😂🤫🤫
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It’s softly, softly, softly.. (that made absolutely no sense but that’s the thought going through my head.)
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Ahahha aahwww thank you so much. I know what you mean! Sometimes we don’t have the right words, just a one word expression!!!
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