I asked myself; “Can I rest in peace, if not alone?”
To walk between a bliss
I have to share you my unknown.
As the story goes on, I can’t reckon my soul.
By thou means; “To break me bone.”
And as I counter my throat for your trust
I shall show you my dearest love by the known.
The goddess of love,
Let us begin with a story to tell; “A twist from to be flown.”
One story,
one chance,
one day of adultery to be outgrown.
You have shown me to believe
in this misery of your own.
I shall not be your sorrow
as you have spoken with your lips of lies,
shared with your eyes of surprise
and cried with your tears of the deaths thrown.
27 responses to “‘vitriol,”
Wonderful work..
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Thank you so much, Singh ☺️🙈❤️
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This is beautiful! Just absolutely stunning. Thank you so much for sharing.
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Thank you so much, Jade ☺️🤗❤️ I’m so glad you liked it! Always my pleasure to share my work 🙈
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“You have shown me to believe
in this misery of your own.
I shall not be your sorrow
as you have spoken with your lips of lies,”
Well shown, Jojo. Thy words be thine own. Bravo! 🙌🙏💛
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Hihihih well, Thank you milady 🤭 you make me blissful blush 🤭🤭😍 I’m glad you loved that part. I tried to make a twist in the poem itself and that was the core part for the twist 🤭 thanks for noticing things like that!!
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This is so deep. This verse-cried with your tears of the deaths thrown. So well written 👌
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Veera, thank you so much for reading my work 🤭🙈 I’m glad you like it!! Hihihih!🙏🏽❤️
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Your welcome. It was worth the read. keep blogging
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Thank you so much, dear ☺️❤️ kall ho na ho🥰
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Your welcome. Wow great to know you know hindhi
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Hahaha, let’s just say i have seen plenty of old school bollywood movies back in the days🤣😳
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Wonderful post. Loved it. Also do check my latest blog post. I nominated you for the Blogger Recognition Award 🤗🎀♥️
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Yaaay, thank you so much, dear ❤️😊 I’m glad you loved it 😊🙏🏽 oehhh, I Will definitely check it out, Thank you in advance ❤️❤️😊😊🙏🏽🙏🏽
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My pleasure dear! Yessss. Yaay! Thank you so much. Sureee you deserve it🤗♥️🎀
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Hihihih yaaay, she thinks I deserve it😳😳🙈🙈❤️❤️❤️ Thanks once again 🤭🤗
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Hihihi! Awww so sweet!
My pleasure. 😊🥰😃😂😉
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Hihihih good🤭❤️
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😂☺️
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Touching❤️
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This means allot to me, Thank you so much 🙈😊❤️
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“As the story goes on, I can’t reckon my soul” this is hits deep…… Amazeeeeeeee. Truly powerful piece. Love every part ❤️❤️
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I thank you a thousand and million Times ❤️❤️ I’m so grateful to have a supporting friend in this community!!! You inspire me to write every day!! ❤️❤️😍😍
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No need to thank me…. You deserve every praise that you receive ❤️❤️
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🤭❤️🙏🏽
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Trust me Jojo sir, I loved it, it felt like a novel uh know? Your poems are love. I never have called uh by your name, I read a comment of your telling someone that he can call uh just Jojo or jj but trust me ik it’s not that calling just by name is like rude or anything but I’ve so much esteem for your work, for your love towards poem, I’d never b able to call uh just by your name also cuz of age differs, I can’t but what all I mean to say is you’re above to the edge of giving you esteems for your work, just your work!! Love you for what you’re, a really kind and a Yankee guy I know!! Stay always same okay?? And yes I’ll always be there with you as a spirit, also to haunt you too sometimes but would never leave you, trust me!! Love you poet friend, like in my life I can proudly say I’ve got my poet friend, that I always wished to have one, Oh God, thank you for sharing your works Jojo sir😭❤❤❤❤❤
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I Will not change myself, the only thing I can do is evolve, experience and better myself into something better; and you inspire me to do so❤️🙏🏽😍
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