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‘vitriol,

I asked myself; “Can I rest in peace, if not alone?”

To walk between a bliss

I have to share you my unknown.

As the story goes on, I can’t reckon my soul.

By thou means; “To break me bone.”

And as I counter my throat for your trust

I shall show you my dearest love by the known.

The goddess of love,  

Let us begin with a story to tell; “A twist from to be flown.”

One story,

one chance,

one day of adultery to be outgrown.

You have shown me to believe

in this misery of your own.

I shall not be your sorrow

as you have spoken with your lips of lies,

shared with your eyes of surprise

and cried with your tears of the deaths thrown.

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27 responses to “‘vitriol,”

  3. “You have shown me to believe

    in this misery of your own.

    I shall not be your sorrow

    as you have spoken with your lips of lies,”

    Well shown, Jojo. Thy words be thine own. Bravo! 🙌🙏💛

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    • Hihihih well, Thank you milady 🤭 you make me blissful blush 🤭🤭😍 I’m glad you loved that part. I tried to make a twist in the poem itself and that was the core part for the twist 🤭 thanks for noticing things like that!!

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  7. “As the story goes on, I can’t reckon my soul” this is hits deep…… Amazeeeeeeee. Truly powerful piece. Love every part ❤️❤️

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    • I thank you a thousand and million Times ❤️❤️ I’m so grateful to have a supporting friend in this community!!! You inspire me to write every day!! ❤️❤️😍😍

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  9. Trust me Jojo sir, I loved it, it felt like a novel uh know? Your poems are love. I never have called uh by your name, I read a comment of your telling someone that he can call uh just Jojo or jj but trust me ik it’s not that calling just by name is like rude or anything but I’ve so much esteem for your work, for your love towards poem, I’d never b able to call uh just by your name also cuz of age differs, I can’t but what all I mean to say is you’re above to the edge of giving you esteems for your work, just your work!! Love you for what you’re, a really kind and a Yankee guy I know!! Stay always same okay?? And yes I’ll always be there with you as a spirit, also to haunt you too sometimes but would never leave you, trust me!! Love you poet friend, like in my life I can proudly say I’ve got my poet friend, that I always wished to have one, Oh God, thank you for sharing your works Jojo sir😭❤❤❤❤❤

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