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‘Deviate,

When time holds up a mirror to my face.

I seek my own enemy;

“As I get not to see I feel this honesty of disgrace.”

When the feel of deception beholds me,

I foul my heart;

“as there was no mere play at place.”

It’s oddly satisfying to know what is not.

To walk this path down by my chase.

I run towards myself at ease,

as I want to follow my stream to earth.

This has not been me to replace.

As I start from the beginning,

To rise one step;

“I seek my inner grace.”

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27 responses to “‘Deviate,”

    • Marie, Thank you so much for the nomination! I feel so honoured that you thought of me🙈🙈 I do accept the nomination, you Will see my answers this sunday ❤️🙏🏽 thank you a thousand times for this amazing suprise 😍

      Ps, I truly loved your answers. They were honesty and sincere 🤗 congratulation on your first and let’s go for many more 🥰

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    • Dessertflower, long time no speak. How have you been?? Missed you around!! And thank you so much ❤️🙈 would i be bold if i could ask your name? I love it when I can call people by their first name🙈

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      • HAhah yeah. I have not had the time to read fellow works as regular as I would like to. I have been quite busy these days. No no you are not bold. I quite understand you. My name is Raghavasree but you can call me by my middle name Veera. Hope you are well?

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      • I totally get it, and no problem. We all have some busy periods. Raghavasree, such an lovely name. Trust me, i will forget it🙈😳 but i can remember Veera😊 so that will do for me. Thanks. And I’m fine too😊

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      • Thankyou for understanding. Good to hear you are doing well. Gratitude for remembering my middle name and for forgetting my name. lol . I get you man. Have a great day

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  5. Please correct me if somewhere I interpreted wrong:
    “As I get not to see I feel this honesty of disgrace.”
    You were seeking your enemy (that’s you only) and found “disgrace” to be honest, so inner grace wasn’t present initially. Then a fresh start, walked down the Lane (we all accompanied you) and got enlightened (my inner grace, hmm depend on the reader)

    “as there was no mere play at place.” – Didn’t get! Please help.

    “It’s oddly satisfying to know what is not.” 💛 💛 It Feels so TRUE.

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    • Hi Nebula,

      When time holds up a mirror to my face. I seek my own enemy;
      “As I get not to see I feel this honesty of disgrace.”
      ( You see, I’m looking at myself at the moment, and I’m looking for the enemy in me (the bad guy) but I cant see it, so I feel disgrace. Because I always thought I was the “enemy”)

      Now the next line;
      When the feel of deception beholds me, I foul my heart;
      “as there was no mere play at place.”
      ( The deception I had was not true, It was a lie. “The no mere play at place” is a stage, a play. an act that has been played”)
      “No mere” is latin for nothing more than something specified. So, “No mere play” nothing more than a play at place.

      So by “It’s oddly satisfying to know what is not” I can start over and seek the inner grace in me. because there is no disgrace!

      hope it helps you 🙂

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      • yes sure it did. thanks again. Thanks a ton. I am back to my lecture hall! Making sure the syllabus is covered perfectly. And I kind of replicated the same behavior.

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      • Hahahaha 😂😂😂 let’s Just hope that Will not happen for real 😳👀 let’s go for being bald than… Trust me, I hate the thought of it, but for now I can accept it!! 🤫🤫😂😂

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      • 🙈🙈🙈☺️❤️😍😍❤️🤗🙏🏽☺️🥰😊🎥😚💯😊🤣🤣🤗😭🎥😭🤣😚😳😱😳💙😂🎥💯😳😱🥰🎥😚🥰🤣😂🤣💯🤣💋🛑😚😳😱😳✌🏽✋💋🛑😓🛑✌🏽💕😱😳💯🤣

        *My emotions at the moment 😳

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  8. Poems tip to the toe is love, I won’t write much, cuz as usual uh left me with no single word but not words, indeed. More love to you always Jojo sir!! ❤❤❤

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