What to remember, my son?
“Nothingness rises into ashes sun.”
What am I to my son?
“Life seamless just begun.”
What have you seen, my son?
“You are everything to someone.”
What have I done?
What am I to you?
You have been afraid not so long,
from mistakes you have fallen,
to learn the right from wrong.
To wake up,
To shine,
To arise from chirping bird song.
A lullaby sweet as home.
Love-one, wait not for misery,
to you I will find my stay in Rome.
To be,
(To me)
A father for thee.
26 responses to “‘Father,”
I love this!😍
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Thank you so much, antisocial!! 🤗🤗❤️ I really appreciate it, and thank you for taking your time to read my work! 🙏🏽🤗
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Wow so beautiful.
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Thank you so much, dessertflower! I’m so glad you loved it 🙈❤️
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Sweet!
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Thank you so much, Masercot. Thank you for reading my work! 🤗🙏🏽
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Awww i am blown away💕💕💕
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“Love-one, wait not for misery, / to you I will find my stay in Rome. / To be, / (To me) / A father for thee.” Wow, this one ends in a story kind of mystery. It could be a life tale, or it could be a semi-religious vale. And a slightly different style, the fish grows legs… your soul shines through your poetry. With a bit of holy ghostery. ♡❤︎🙏☀︎䷰
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Gosh, your eyes of detail. I love how you always find a way to understand my “writing”. To really open your mind and try to find a way to make it “yours” to understand! I’m glad to have a reader like you!
I’m so happy to know that you truly appreciate my work. It’s always hard to find someone who’s alike.
The ending was supposed to kind off to be a mystery, so you really could have it your own way!
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Thank you dear friend for all these amazing kind words. ❤️ And mystery is bliss-tery. Hehe. 🤓✌️😎
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Hahaha amen to that, Lia! 😂🤗😊
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Excellent and heart lifting words.
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Thank you so much, 100 country trek🤗❤️
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Touching one….
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Thank you so much, Nabeela!❤️ This one was truly for the fathers. I myself don’t have a kid, but I would imagine it would kinda feel like this!
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Lovely post
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Thank you so much, shivi 😊 thank you for your time to read my work ❤️
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Wowwwwww❤️
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Thank you a thousand times for everything, Soni 😍❤️🙈
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My pleasure… Keep it up 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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I Will do that for sure😍😍 this was so motivating 🤗❤️
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Trust me I ain’t lying, I scroll all downward to your poetry’s and your maybe first poem would be hymn over here, I mean with posts, like I read every every single words uh write, and it just touches my soul!! Thank you for sharing your work, with your tiny fan, with everyone, reading out your work again and again!! Wishing God to × your fans into thousand more!! Always so much love to you poet sir!! ❤❤❤
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Can’t wait until the day you have read everything ❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 and I hope I can write many more ❤️❤️
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Definitely I’ll read your every poems, won’t miss anyone, I don’t watch web series much but this poems have become like my drugs, so anyways in short more love to uh❤
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Amen to your loving comments 🙏🏽🥰❤️
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