To whittle and knot with tension in my heart,
To be flown,
To be risen, to my heart of art.
To you I say; I Am….?
“For my shredding part I fall, I fell, and have been taken apart”.
To imagine and dream with hope in my eyes.
To be drawn,
To be loved, to the rhyme of wise.
To you I said; We ever shall……?
“For the hidden space I lie, I lied, and believed my lies.”
18 responses to “‘Ephemeral,”
Beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Jason 🙏🏽☺️ appreciated!!
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This is really good!
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Thank you so much, Bob☺️🙏🏽 appreciate it
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Beautiful words
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Thank you so much, creative Chic ☺️
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You’re welcome
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I really love this one Jojo. It feels full of fresh joy. I like how your poems seem to tell a story. 💐💛🌤
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Hihihih thank you so much, Lia ☺️☺️💞
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‘I lied, and believed my lies’… wonderfully crafted!
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Thank you so much 😊❤️
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Always, my pleasure!😊💛
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The tension is built dramatically through the poem so that the last line has great impact. If I may say, well done!
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Thank you so much, clcouch123 ☺️ I really appreciate it!!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Bella 🤗🤗 take care and enjoy your Friday 🙏🏽
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To be risen, to my heart of art.
Wow, wow, wow!!!!!! This is really beautiful writing. Really good work. 👌🤗
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Thank you so much, Kendi. I’m so glad you loved it😊. Really appreciate it 🤗
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