We kiss Athena ,the modern Greek, willing to fight for the ancient weak! At her highest peak and as mystique she was she was thorn by medieval doublespeak! Her tongue whispers all chic with barren words and flatteries of the unique.
We kiss Athena ,the modern Greek, willing to fight for the ancient weak! At her highest peak and as mystique she was she was thorn by medieval doublespeak! Her tongue whispers all chic with barren words and flatteries of the unique.
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And we the pious eye, a crippled chair to judge Athena by. Oh, oh my. Dear Athena, hence thou hie.
Very cool word play and message you used in your prose poem, Jojo! :)) ππ
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Thank you so much, lia. It means a lot to me! I like your word play as wellπβΊοΈ
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Fyi, keep your spirit up for your work and writing! π€ One community one goal. To write and to inspire! π
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Dude… you literally gave me a sudden tear in my eye. And these are not barren words. Nor flatteries. (Nor unique, sadly ;)). Thank you and bless you for that. Made me smile.
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Haha love it how you used my own line against me π it’s all my pleasure, lia. I’m glad I made you smile. ππ Never forget why you started writing!
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Hehe I did not mean to… honest. :)) I was only defending my own clichΓ©-sounding words as I wrote them. :)) But I could relate your poem, when I first read it. And I think it held truth, in a very craftful and clever way.
Thanks for the smiles and the good advice. Now, if only I could remember back that far…ππππππ
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Haha, was just kidding, lia. I thought it was funny. It’s a compliment for me, honestπ
And mostly a compliment because you could relate it. That’s what it makes it even more special for me βΊοΈ so thank you for that amazing compliment!!!
Thank you for the smiles and compliment, lia! Now, let’s not Crack your brain. ππ π We still need it for the writing ππ
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Wow, I love the photo! Did you take it?
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I wish, Karine. I got it from the internet. Pexel, an amazing photographer took it! Pixabay if I’m correct!
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[β¦] to maybe the first poem I commented on of his, after heβd been starring my work for a while: βAthena (wp link: here). [β¦]
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