Blood on my hands,
Envy is my wish on demand.
And I had to fight those battles.
Unity brought us together, but scares
That was beneath my skin.
I am one pain away from the win.
From falling to rising sin. “have my soul
Under your control”. Pain shattering me down,
Love brought me here, wearing the crown!
13 responses to “‘Beautiful,”
Great🍀
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Thanks you so much! 😊
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Beautiful indeed
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Thank you so much, michnavs ☺️
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Very good idea to experiment with different forms of poetry; we learn so much from trying different things, sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn’t. This works, well done, but keep experimenting!
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Thank you so much, Paul! Really appreciate it! I love every feedback that can help me improve my work! And you know that I love experiment different forms of writing! 😊 So, once again, thank you for the compliment!
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Wonderful poetry!
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Thank you so much😊
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Always welcome
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Some glowing thoughts… Lovely!
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Thank you so much.☺️
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Love! It all seems perfect..
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Thank you so much, I’m glad you liked it!☺️
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